Some of your shots are well framed, good work and pleased to see your media terminology being used! The shots by themselves don't quite tell the story you have narrated, remember the shot has to do the talking. However for a first attempt at narrative, not bad, we will work on this. Try not to just explain the reason for the shot, give the meaning. What can a school represent, what might the audience assume from seeing this? How could you have shot the high angle to help tell the story more? What does the framing of your mid shot say about the character?
Some of your shots are well framed, good work and pleased to see your media terminology being used! The shots by themselves don't quite tell the story you have narrated, remember the shot has to do the talking. However for a first attempt at narrative, not bad, we will work on this. Try not to just explain the reason for the shot, give the meaning. What can a school represent, what might the audience assume from seeing this? How could you have shot the high angle to help tell the story more? What does the framing of your mid shot say about the character?
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